I love your colourful slideshow Shay. I especially like the very colourful fingerprint that you have presented. I am hoping that you may share more about why you like art, gymnastics and writing. They are great things to be interested in.
Hi Shay,My name is Bridget.I loved this part because of all the clourful backgrouds. The image of Ailee reminds me of her.To improve, you could try to put Captail letters for names as well as the beging of the sentence.
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I love your colourful slideshow Shay. I especially like the very colourful fingerprint that you have presented. I am hoping that you may share more about why you like art, gymnastics and writing. They are great things to be interested in.
ReplyDeleteHi Shay,My name is Bridget.I loved this part because of all the clourful backgrouds. The image of Ailee reminds me of her.To improve, you could try to put Captail letters for names as well as the beging of the sentence.
ReplyDeletethank you for the helpful and thoughtful also positive. :)
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