here is my stroy what i did about 2 weeks ago so here it is Wild animal attack at yms
On tuesday 13th of june an 15 year old rino got out of his cage and excpt out of orana wildlife park in christchurch and then he went for a walk down the road and he had to end up in yaldhurst model school and the kid were outside for their break time.
And all the kids saw the rhino running into the playground and all of the kids ran into the closet classrooms to the playground and then the school went into lock down time for two hours the kid were serred and were really terrified.
After all that the pinsteablol called the zookeeper and the zookeeper said that they have no idea of how the rhino got out of the cage because there were no damned to the cage but it good that not all of them got out and the zookeeper said that the rhinos will get moved into a new cage so we can look at the cage to see if there is anything wrong with the cage.
And the zoo said it WILL NOT HAPPEN AGAIN and if it does it will not leave the zoo. I am so sorry for scaring the kids in that school.
After all that happened we are going to figure out how the rhino got out and make it so the rhino can not get out again.
Hi shay,Its Bridget From Yaldhurst Model School. I like how you gave a newspaper report a go I think you have made a few mistakes But that is fine because I did to so dont worry if you think that you did bad but you were actually ment to write 2 pages so now I am going to tell you what you made mistakes. 1 you didn't use captail letters and full stops. Well you did have a few of them. 2 some of your words are spelt wrong.
ReplyDeleteYours senscerly Bridget