Hey there Shay, it's me Parwin! I like your blog post because you added photos to your presentation and its very colourful. I really liked pet day and I like judging the animals because I got to hold them and they were really cute! I think that maybe next time you could add a bit more information and re read your writing because you had some mistakes there but apart from that, you did a great job!
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Hey there Shay, it's me Parwin!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post because you added photos to your presentation and its very colourful. I really liked pet day and I like judging the animals because I got to hold them and they were really cute! I think that maybe next time you could add a bit more information and re read your writing because you had some mistakes there but apart from that, you did a great job!
Looking forward to your next blog posts,
Parwin