Thursday, June 1, 2017

My Story



                             The teachers said  in my class today that we are going to do a picture book or newspaper.                              
                                I said I'll do a picture book and my teacher's said yes so i did. Here is my

                                first picture.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Shay my name is Tali, I am a year six from St Bernadette's School. This is my first time looking at your blog, I thought your work on My Story was great. I liked how you put a picture of your drawing and that you added some information of what happened. Maybe next time you could cheek your work because you had a lowercase I when it should be an capital. Keep up the good work.

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