Thursday, March 7, 2019

Free write of a life time

Hi heres my blog post from yesterday im sorry I did not get a charnce to finch it but it is hope you injoy and get inspred bye see next time you injoyed my blog post thank you for cheking out my blog hope to see you again.
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3 comments:

  1. Maree @ PESMarch 8, 2019 at 9:30 AM

    Kia Ora Shay,
    My name is Maree I am a year 8 student @Pt england School.
    I really enjoyed reading about your Free Writing Of A Life Time, It was so amazing to read about you from a very young age to now. I hope You Post More Amazing Work Keep it up...

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    1. AnonymousMarch 13, 2019 at 11:43 AM

      Thank you Maree for your feedback I will go and look at your blog but thank you so much for checking my blog I will love to see what you have been doing at school bye.

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  2. AnonymousMay 24, 2019 at 10:31 AM

    Kia Ora Shay,
    My name is Zipporah and I am a Year 7 from St Bernadette's!
    I really liked the way you told the story about yourself and now we know a lot about you! Did you know when I was a baby I had Pneumonia? Now that my doctor has removed or healed me I am now healthy!

    I just wanted to say about your writing, Maybe you could start off with something else either than "and then" and maybe you could check up with your spelling!

    Overall you have an amazing life and I hope you keep up with your good effort in your work.

    Loves,
    Zipporah

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