remember its not finished and its like a diary BUT i'm going on a trip some were I camping and it goes wrong but I don't know how here is what I have so far. OH AND I STILL HAVE TO ADD FULL STOPS AND MOrE LIKE THAT SO YEA I'M WOrKING ON THAT NOW :)
Here it is I hope you enjoyed it if so feel free to leave a comment with some feed back what I could add on to this story to make something bad happen ... FEEL FREE TO COMMENT and thank you all for taking soem time out of your day to come and have a look at my writing.
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