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Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you explained what you did for technology in level two, and what happened!
Did you think about splitting the writing in half, and making the writing bigger.
Next time you could re-read the writing to make sure it makes sense, also split the writing in half, and making the writing bigger so it is easier to read.
Kind Regards Jorja.
Hello Shay!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your Writing about Technology Classes at Lincoln School. I found it hard to understand what you wrote because you spelt a lot of words wrong and some of the sentences didn't make sense. One thing I would Recommend is maybe fo your Teacher to Check your Spelling and to make sure your sentences make sense.and I also do Technology at my school! We also do sewing, woodworks, cooking and technology.
From Nova
Hello Nova!
DeleteThank you for your feed back Im sure to take that all in mind for next time. And your teachnolgy sounds similar to my class teachnolgy we do the same subject to you. I like teachnolgy do you?
- From Shay