hello welcome back to my blog. today im going to be showing you some videos and photos of some things my class have been doing on the first week back at school.
i hope you enjoyed my very bad blog post.
comment some feed back and some qustions if you hvae any.
and have a good day / night! :)
Thursday, July 23, 2020
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Hey Shay it's Ashlee I love your blog post it is really good and well written. Next time I would suggest adding more info and writing a longer blog post but you did well and also adding what you learned I understand that you could have forgotten some of the facts but I believe you could have added what the instruments were called.
ReplyDeleteBut you did do a great job good blog post nice punctuation just could you add the few things that I said to your blog post as editing.
Sincerely Ashlee from Yaldhurst Model School your post police buddy bye
from Ashlee.
Hey Ashlee thank you very much for your kind comment. I will take that feedback to mind for next time. thank you for taking some time out of your day to have look at my blog and leave some feedback thank you.
Delete- from Shay